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Re: Concertina (New version added)
Mother is downstairs, Hesitant fingers asking The concertina to sing In the dimly lit kitchen. It speaks slowly, new life Taken into her arms Long-barren of child. Their growth intertwines. ...
Mar 2, 2008 -
Re: Jasmine's Efforts At Writing
February- 29 poems, a story, pieces still in the post, I've journalled every day,and finished my journal yesterday, so I need to start a fresh one, only five haikus, which ...
Mar 1, 2008 -
Re: Only Speak in Song Titles
I'm only happy when it rains- Garbage
Feb 29, 2008 -
Re: I have a problem.
Ya, sunshine's right. You make yourself do it. Write down the idea for the new story so you don't lose it, but don't write it until what you're working on ...
Feb 23, 2008 -
Re: I Will Critique!
I'd love one on this, if you have time.If you don't, don't worry.
Feb 23, 2008 -
Re: Old times with old love
Ya, that sounds about right.
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: Goodnight...
Goodnight can-opener. Sometimes Goodnight Wall, but that wasn't an option...also goodnight fish.
Feb 17, 2008 -
Re: What Does YWS Really Stand For?
You Will Suffer. (Man, we're a cheerful bunch, aren't we?) Though I'm sure this may change to"You What, Sir?" on a more optimistic, or even just a less pessimistic, day.
Feb 17, 2008 -
Re: What Is Your Favorite YWS Random Generator?
*blinks in confusion, then considers further investigation*
Feb 17, 2008 -
Re: Old times with old love
Don't know where my focus is gone, I apologise...Kit, any opinions/thoughts on Julian and Abigail? I'd say she'd want to wait another three months at least before doing anything open, ...
Feb 17, 2008 -
Re: How do you find time?
I went through this whole no-time-to-write thing last year when I was doing my leaving. I got around it by writing between the time I washed my teeth and brushed ...
Feb 17, 2008 -
Re: Changed Your Username? Tell Us Here!
Yay! Nate is Nate again! The natural order of the universe has been restored! :D
Feb 17, 2008 -
Re: Kills Me
Some good points have been made, and I apologise in advance for reiterating what's already been said; Firstly, I'd omit the spaces, and change your font to regular, as it's ...
Feb 14, 2008 -
Re: Be My Anti-Valentine
I like the approach you've taken, and your rhyme is very good. I think some of yoru rhythm is a little off though. Maybe try reading it aloud so that ...
Feb 14, 2008 -
Re: Changed Your Username? Tell Us Here!
:( I hate name changes. They confuse me, and make me feel all disorientated. And I miss some of the old names. Just thought I'd share that! Heeheehee.
Feb 14, 2008
